Wedding Morn

D. H. Lawrence

11 September 1885 to 2 March 1930 (~45)

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My first of days,
His all to me, and I
Or my rich reward.
Shall see an image of heaven or of earth
Then I shall know which image of God
He will sleep of me.
Cautiously I shall raise
On his limbs that I shall weep to know
For me to count—for I know he will
He will lie negligent, resign
And when the dawn comes creeping in,
Greatly enrichen me.
Of me, as under my gaze,
And I shall know my bitter rod
Of the coin I’ve accepted as mine,
And plain at the side of me,
I long to see
This sleeping wealth of mine.
And I shall know the stamp and worth
Opening his value plain to my eye
Shall watch the dawn light up for me
My man is made toward,
Face freed of the wavering blaze.
And waiting while light is shed
On his brow where the wisps of fond hair twine
Lie under my mastery.
As it shows him sleeping a sleep he got
My love, that spinning coin, laid still
Yea and I long to see him sleep
In my power utterly,
I long to know what I have to keep,
It will find me watching at the marriage gate
Myself to watch the morning win
On his sleep that is filled of me,
Whitening across the bed,
On his minted metal shine.
With a sunk, abandoned head.
And I shall watch the wan light shine
Ah, when to-morrow the dawn comes late
He grows distinct, and I see his hot
On his lips where the light breaths come and go
Naïve and winsomely,
In my power utterly,
So truthfully,
And then he will be mine, he will lie
In a shining crack of red,
On him who is sleeping satiate,
The morning breaks like a pomegranate
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