O saw ye not fair Ines? she's gone into the west,
To dazzle when the sun is down, and rob the world of rest;
She took our daylight with her, the smiles that we love best,
With morning blushes on her cheek, and pearls upon her breast.
O turn again, fair Ines, before the fall of night,
For fear the moon should shine alone, and stars unrivalled bright;
And blessèd will the lover be that walks beneath their light,
And breathes the love against thy cheek I dare not even write!
Would I had been, fair Ines, that gallant cavalier
Who rode so gayly by thy side and whispered thee so near!
Were there no bonny dames at home, or no true lovers here,
That he should cross the seas to win the dearest of the dear?
I saw thee, lovely Ines, descend along the shore,
With bands of noble gentlemen, and banners waved before;
And gentle youth and maidens gay, and snowy plumes they wore;—
It would have been a beauteous dream—if it had been no more!
Alas! alas! fair Ines! she went away with song,
With music waiting on her steps, and shoutings of the throng;
But some were sad, and felt no mirth, but only Music's wrong,
In sounds that sang Farewell, Farewell to her you've loved so long.
Farewell, farewell, fair Ines! that vessel never bore
So fair a lady on its deck, nor danced so light before—
Alas for pleasure on the sea, and sorrow on the shore!
The smile that blest one lover's heart has broken many more!
Thomas Hood’s "Fair Ines" is a lyrical ballad steeped in themes of idealized beauty, unrequited love, and melancholy. Hood captures a sense of both admiration and loss through his depiction of Ines, a beautiful woman who captivates all but leaves an ache in her wake as she departs for an unknown journey. This analysis will explore the poem’s themes, structure, and use of literary devices to reveal Hood’s vision of love as simultaneously enchanting and tragic.
"Fair Ines" is structured as a series of six quatrains, or four-line stanzas, written in a consistent ABAB rhyme scheme. This structure lends the poem a melodic, song-like quality, amplifying the wistful mood that Hood creates. The titular character, Ines, is depicted almost as an ethereal, elusive being—so radiant that her departure seems to steal the light from the world. Hood’s speaker is deeply enamored with Ines, yet he cannot hold onto her; she is both an object of admiration and a source of profound heartache.
Each stanza builds upon this central motif, alternating between admiration for her beauty and lamentation over her departure. Hood’s language and imagery emphasize not only Ines’s allure but also the emotional void her absence creates, capturing the bittersweet nature of beauty and desire that cannot be possessed.
First Stanza
"O saw ye not fair Ines? she's gone into the west,
To dazzle when the sun is down, and rob the world of rest;
She took our daylight with her, the smiles that we love best,
With morning blushes on her cheek, and pearls upon her breast."
The opening stanza sets a tone of both awe and sorrow. Hood uses the image of Ines departing "into the west," a direction often associated with the end of day, suggesting that her absence brings an end to light and joy. Described as one who will “dazzle when the sun is down,” Ines becomes a celestial figure, her beauty so potent that it rivals even natural wonders. The line “rob the world of rest” implies that her absence leaves a gap too large to ignore, leaving admirers restless. Hood’s use of imagery here—“morning blushes” and “pearls upon her breast”—suggests purity, youth, and wealth, framing Ines as an idealized, almost unattainable figure.
Second Stanza
"O turn again, fair Ines, before the fall of night,
For fear the moon should shine alone, and stars unrivalled bright;
And blessèd will the lover be that walks beneath their light,
And breathes the love against thy cheek I dare not even write!"
The plea for Ines to return reveals the speaker's intense longing. Hood invokes celestial imagery, contrasting Ines's beauty with that of the moon and stars, which would “shine alone” without her presence. This comparison highlights her rarity and the way she enriches the world simply by existing in it. The line “And blessèd will the lover be” conveys the speaker’s awareness that he is not the one fortunate enough to claim her affections. His hesitation—“I dare not even write”—suggests a love so profound it cannot be fully expressed in words, capturing the restraint and intensity of unspoken desire.
Third Stanza
"Would I had been, fair Ines, that gallant cavalier
Who rode so gayly by thy side and whispered thee so near!
Were there no bonny dames at home, or no true lovers here,
That he should cross the seas to win the dearest of the dear?"
In this stanza, the speaker imagines himself as the “gallant cavalier” by Ines’s side, symbolizing his yearning to be her chosen companion. There is a note of jealousy and confusion in “Were there no bonny dames at home,” questioning why Ines’s lover would travel so far to court her. Hood conveys the speaker’s dismay at being left behind while others, perhaps less deserving, enjoy her attention. The phrase “dearest of the dear” emphasizes Ines’s unparalleled worth, solidifying her as an idealized figure.
Fourth Stanza
"I saw thee, lovely Ines, descend along the shore,
With bands of noble gentlemen, and banners waved before;
And gentle youth and maidens gay, and snowy plumes they wore;—
It would have been a beauteous dream—if it had been no more!"
Here, the scene shifts to a grand departure, with Ines accompanied by “bands of noble gentlemen” and “snowy plumes.” The image of banners and noblemen indicates that her beauty and status command respect and admiration. However, the line “It would have been a beauteous dream—if it had been no more!” suggests a desire for this moment to remain frozen in time rather than lead to an actual separation. This line subtly hints at the pain of reality intruding upon the beauty of fantasy, foreshadowing the sorrow to come.
Fifth Stanza
"Alas! alas! fair Ines! she went away with song,
With music waiting on her steps, and shoutings of the throng;
But some were sad, and felt no mirth, but only Music's wrong,
In sounds that sang Farewell, Farewell to her you've loved so long."
The repeated “Alas!” conveys deep regret and sorrow, underscoring the sense of irrevocable loss. Hood describes Ines’s departure as accompanied by music and cheering, yet he contrasts this outward celebration with the internal sadness of those who truly loved her. The phrase “Music’s wrong” implies that the music, rather than lifting spirits, only amplifies the grief of those left behind. Hood uses the refrain of “Farewell” to drive home the pain of departure, reminding readers that not all farewells are easy or joyful.
Sixth Stanza
"Farewell, farewell, fair Ines! that vessel never bore
So fair a lady on its deck, nor danced so light before—
Alas for pleasure on the sea, and sorrow on the shore!
The smile that blest one lover's heart has broken many more!"
In the final stanza, the speaker concedes to Ines’s departure, acknowledging her as the “fairest lady” ever to grace the ship. The contrasting images of “pleasure on the sea” and “sorrow on the shore” highlight the emotional divide between those accompanying her and those left behind. Hood concludes with the poignant line, “The smile that blest one lover’s heart has broken many more,” encapsulating the bittersweet nature of love that brings joy to some while leaving others in pain.
Thomas Hood’s "Fair Ines" masterfully explores the tension between beauty and loss, love and yearning. Through rich imagery and wistful tones, the poem elevates Ines to an almost mythic status, capturing the universal experience of loving someone who is beyond one’s reach. Hood’s speaker finds himself entranced yet tormented by Ines, as her departure embodies both the allure and inevitable sorrow of idealized love. By crafting each stanza with delicate imagery and contrasting emotions, Hood leaves readers with a profound sense of beauty marred by melancholy, illustrating the pain that can accompany the love of something—or someone—ephemeral.