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Invisible

by Elizabeth Devereux · English

Elizabeth Devereux portrait
12 March 1934 - 29 July 2023 (~89)
life invisible older social body

Elizabeth Devereux’s “Invisible” enters one of poetry’s most enduring ethical territories: the encounter with another person whom society has taught us not fully to see. Its speaker is an elderly woman moving through public space with “Wrinkled hands” and “worn wooden canes,” outward signs that invite quick categorization. Yet the poem’s central claim is that such categorization is an act of profound reduction. Behind the body perceived as frail, slow, and dependent exists an intricate history: a life of dance, wartime flight, erotic love, bereavement, travel, artistic aspiration, survival, and reflection. The poem therefore addresses aging not merely as a biological condition but as a crisis of recognition. What becomes “invisible” is not the older body itself, which may be conspicuously present, but the personhood, memory, and imaginative depth that the body contains.

The opening immediately establishes a visual and sonic vocabulary of neglect. The elderly figures are “Shuffling past, unseen, unheard, unnamed.” This threefold sequence does more than state that they are ignored. “Unseen” suggests a failure of attentive perception; “unheard” points to the dismissal of voice and testimony; “unnamed” implies the final social erasure of individuality. To be unnamed is to be absorbed into a category—old people, pensioners, burdens, strangers—rather than encountered as a singular human being. Devereux’s language makes this process feel cumulative. A passerby who refuses eye contact is not simply hurried or distracted; the poem asks readers to recognize how ordinary habits of public indifference can become a form of social disappearance.

At the same time, “Invisible” carefully avoids presenting its speaker only as a victim. Her first description of herself as possessing a “weathered face” is followed by the striking metaphor of “the tapestry of years I’ve laced.” A tapestry is an artifact of patience, pattern, labor, and color. Its threads may be tangled from close range, but viewed more broadly they form a coherent, meaningful design. By using the verb “laced,” the speaker claims active participation in the making of her life. She has not merely endured time; she has woven experience into identity. This image also counters the simplifying gaze of the hurried observer. Where the passerby sees wrinkles, the speaker sees texture; where the passerby sees decline, she sees accumulated craftsmanship.

The poem belongs to a broad modern and contemporary cultural conversation about ageism: the prejudice by which older people are imagined as passive, unproductive, cognitively diminished, or socially expendable. In many societies shaped by consumer culture, bodily speed, technological novelty, and the idealization of youth, old age is often treated as a future to be feared rather than a stage of life to be understood. Devereux confronts this cultural discomfort directly in the accusation, “You rush by, averting eyes from my weathered face.” The phrase “averting eyes” is especially important. The problem is not ignorance in the innocent sense of not knowing; it is a chosen refusal to know. Looking away protects the younger observer from recognizing vulnerability, mortality, and the possibility that the older stranger may possess a richer history than the observer can imagine.

The poem’s use of direct address gives this critique unusual force. The repeated “you” does not allow readers to remain detached spectators of the speaker’s suffering. “You see a crone, a burden, naught but old,” the voice declares, implicating an audience in the habits it condemns. Yet this “you” should not be understood as a narrowly individualized accusation. It is also a social “you”: a culture that organizes public places around haste, a media environment that privileges young faces, and a language of care that can conceal condescension. The poem is interested in the gap between what people believe about themselves and what their actions reveal. One may consider oneself compassionate while still failing to notice the full humanity of an elder encountered on a pavement, in a shop, on public transport, or in a care setting.

Devereux intensifies this ethical challenge by giving the speaker a life story that unfolds in vivid, mobile fragments. “Once, I danced in Singapore’s gilded halls,” she remembers. The contrast between this image and the opening’s shuffling figures is deliberately dramatic. Dancing evokes grace, bodily confidence, rhythm, pleasure, and public visibility; the cane evokes physical limitation and the possibility of being regarded as an obstacle. But the poem does not present these states as contradictory identities. They belong to the same woman. The body that now moves slowly is the body that once danced. This continuity is essential to the poem’s emotional power, because it makes age not a replacement of one self by another but an expansion of a life across time.

Singapore’s appearance also broadens the poem beyond a purely domestic portrait of aging. The “gilded halls” evoke glamour and colonial or cosmopolitan splendor, though the phrase remains impressionistic rather than historically specific. It invites readers to imagine a world of travel, social gatherings, music, and international movement. The following assertion, “Fled war’s fury, scaled fortune’s falls,” complicates that elegance with danger and upheaval. The speaker’s past is not simply romantic. It includes displacement, fear, and economic instability. “Fled” carries the urgency of a refugee’s movement, while “war’s fury” personifies conflict as a force of violent rage. The phrase “fortune’s falls” suggests that material security has been precarious, subject to sudden reversals. A person now treated as a generic elderly burden may, the poem insists, have lived through historical events that younger people know only through textbooks, films, family stories, or public memorials.

This compressed wartime history is particularly resonant in relation to the twentieth century, when global conflict transformed countless individual lives through evacuation, migration, bereavement, occupation, military service, and the destruction of familiar worlds. The poem does not identify a particular war, and that restraint enables its speaker to become representative without losing personal force. Her experience could gesture toward the broad populations whose histories have been shaped by conflict and resettlement. In this sense, “Invisible” recognizes elderly people as living archives. Their memories may preserve forms of knowledge that are unofficial, intimate, and emotionally textured: what it meant to leave a city, wait for news, lose a loved one, begin again abroad, or carry a private grief through ordinary life.

The speaker’s recollection of “a pilot who kissed the sky” introduces a language of lyric beauty at the very moment it approaches devastating loss. The pilot is defined through his relationship to height and flight. To “kiss the sky” is an image of daring and intimacy, making aviation seem almost mythic. Yet the next phrase—“His crash, my heart’s unending cry”—cuts through this romance with abrupt catastrophe. Devereux turns a public event, an aircraft crash, into the enduring inward event of grief. The crash occurs once; the cry is “unending.” This contrast captures bereavement’s resistance to chronology. Time proceeds, but a traumatic loss can remain emotionally present, recurring in memory with a force that makes the past feel immediate.

Such moments reveal the poem’s interest in the coexistence of visible and invisible time. A stranger may see only an older woman in the present tense, but the speaker experiences herself as inhabited by many temporal layers. She is simultaneously the person who danced, fled, loved, mourned, wandered, wrote, performed, and now walks with difficulty. This layered self resembles the philosophical idea that identity is narrative: people become intelligible not through a single trait or moment but through the stories connecting their experiences. Devereux does not reduce the speaker to a moral lesson about respecting elders; instead, she insists on the density of a particular life. The reader is invited to feel how radically incomplete any first impression must be.

The European scenes continue this expansion of identity. “I wandered Europe’s cobbled streets, / Penned verses of loss and bittersweet.” The cobbled streets evoke historical cities, physical wandering, and the uneven terrain of a life that cannot be made smooth. The speaker is also a writer: she has “penned verses,” turning loss into art. This self-reference gives the poem a subtle metapoetic dimension. The elderly woman does not merely possess memories; she has interpreted them, made language from them, and participated in the cultural practice of poetry. Her life therefore contains not only events but acts of representation. The phrase “loss and bittersweet” recognizes that art often emerges from mixed emotional states rather than from simple misery. Bitterness acknowledges pain, while sweetness suggests the enduring capacity to find beauty, affection, or meaning amid sorrow.

“In Seville’s sun, I found my stage, / A genteel beggar, an artful sage” is among the poem’s most intriguing self-descriptions. Seville, associated in the literary imagination with heat, performance, music, and layered Iberian history, becomes a setting in which the speaker discovers a theatrical or artistic identity. “Found my stage” may refer literally to performance, but it also suggests the way a person learns to inhabit a role before the world. The phrase “genteel beggar” introduces deliberate ambiguity. It may describe artistic poverty, public performance, or a dignified survival strategy. “Artful sage” similarly joins creativity to wisdom. Rather than portraying hardship as humiliating, the speaker frames her past self as resourceful and expressive. Her dignity has not depended upon wealth, youthful beauty, or social approval.

These global references also resist a common stereotype of older people as geographically and imaginatively fixed. The speaker has crossed borders, inhabited different cultures, and encountered both privilege and precarity. Her identity is not confined to the narrow social role assigned to her in the present. Although it would be inappropriate to invent a detailed biography for Devereux beyond what the poem supplies, the poem’s imaginative geography plainly matters. Singapore, Europe, and Seville create a life map whose distances expose the poverty of the dismissive glance. A person cannot be known from gait, clothing, age, or apparent need. The poem’s international settings make that truth sensuously vivid.

The central opposition in “Invisible” is not simply between old and young, but between external appearance and inward reality. “You see a crone, a burden, naught but old, / Not the tales of fire and ice I hold.” The term “crone” has a long and complicated cultural history. In folklore and myth, the crone can be a figure of wisdom, magic, prophecy, and frightening female independence; in everyday usage, however, it has often become a dismissive or cruel label for an older woman. Devereux exposes that degradation by placing the word in the mouth of the judgmental observer. The speaker refuses the label’s reductive power, answering it with “tales of fire and ice.” This elemental imagery suggests extremes of passion and coldness, war and peace, desire and grief, danger and endurance. Her life exceeds the observer’s stale vocabulary.

The poem is especially alert to the gendered dimensions of ageism. Older women have often been subject to a double marginalization: judged according to social ideals of feminine beauty and then rendered socially peripheral when they no longer conform to youth-centered expectations. The speaker’s “weathered face,” “silver heads,” and physical frailty are not neutral images in a culture that frequently treats women’s visible aging as a failure to be hidden, corrected, or mocked. Yet the poem reclaims those signs. Silver is not merely the color of age; it becomes the site of a crown. The final image transforms what is conventionally perceived as decline into a form of sovereignty. The speaker and her fellow elders carry “invisible worlds” that “crown” them, making wisdom, memory, and surviving consciousness sources of dignity.

Devereux repeatedly uses antithesis to dramatize the complexity of aging. The speaker’s eyes are “dimmed,” but they “have witnessed war and peace”; her voice is “soft,” but it “once made the mighty cease.” Dimness is physical, while witnessing is moral and historical. Softness may indicate bodily weakness or social quietness, but the capacity to make “the mighty cease” implies persuasive force. Perhaps the speaker was an activist, an artist, a negotiator, or simply a person whose voice mattered profoundly in a private situation; the poem deliberately leaves the exact context open. What matters is the challenge to assumptions that current frailty cancels former agency. Physical capacity may alter, but it does not erase a life’s influence.

The assertion that the speaker’s voice “once made the mighty cease” has an almost prophetic grandeur. It evokes a tradition in which marginal or vulnerable figures speak truth to power. The elderly woman, ignored in the street, may possess a moral authority unavailable to those who hurry past her. Here the poem draws close to the dramatic monologue, a form in which a speaker reveals a rich and sometimes surprising identity through speech. Like many dramatic monologues, “Invisible” depends upon reversal: the person whom society treats as unimportant becomes the source of the poem’s most commanding language. The voice is at once wounded, proud, accusatory, and generous enough to offer a lesson.

The hypothetical scene of falling deepens the poem’s critique of superficial compassion. “If I should stumble, fall upon the stone, / You’d rush to help, but only flesh and bone / Would you perceive.” This is not an outright rejection of practical assistance. To help someone who has fallen is obviously humane and necessary. But the poem asks whether help without recognition can remain incomplete. The imagined rescuer sees “flesh and bone,” a body requiring intervention, but not “spirit” or “soul.” Devereux exposes the difference between emergency care and genuine regard. A culture can provide assistance to elders while still denying them meaningful conversation, autonomy, curiosity, desire, authority, and participation. The poem therefore presses beyond pity toward a more reciprocal ethics of attention.

“You pat my hand, all pity, no real care” is perhaps the poem’s sharpest indictment of sentimental condescension. The gesture of patting a hand is outwardly tender, but in context it becomes patronizing because it is not accompanied by serious recognition. Pity positions the older person as an object of sorrow; care, in the poem’s fuller sense, requires seeing the person as a subject with a history, will, and ongoing inner life. The distinction is crucial. Pity can preserve hierarchy, allowing the giver to feel benevolent while the recipient remains unheard. Care asks more difficult things: patience, attention, respect, and the willingness to be changed by another person’s story.

The speaker’s claim that others are “Convinced that you’ll never be caught in age’s snare” identifies denial as a major source of ageism. Old age becomes a “snare” not because aging itself is shameful, but because the younger observer imagines it as an alien fate, a trap that happens to someone else. The poem counters this fantasy with the measured warning, “But time ticks on, relentless in its march.” Time here is personified as an unstoppable force. The familiar image of ticking gives the passage an almost audible pressure, while “march” suggests military inevitability, perhaps echoing the earlier evocation of war. No person can remain outside time’s advance. The poem’s moral argument gains force because it rests not only on altruism but on shared destiny.

The phrase “you too shall pass beneath its arch” is richly suggestive. An arch can signify a doorway, a bridge, a ceremonial threshold, or even the architectural passage into another stage of life. Unlike the image of a wall, it implies movement through rather than exclusion. Aging is presented as a threshold every living person approaches. The speaker does not merely threaten the reader with decline; she places them within a human continuum. The younger person of today may become the elder of tomorrow, carrying memories that future strangers will likewise fail to imagine. In this way, the poem replaces the binary of young versus old with a temporal kinship. We are divided by age at a given moment, but joined by the passage of time.

There is a classical philosophical resonance in this reminder of mortality. Traditions of ethical reflection have long argued that awareness of death and aging can deepen humility, compassion, and seriousness about how one lives. Devereux’s poem shares this insight, but it gives it an everyday social form. The question is not only how an individual should face death; it is how one should look at an older stranger on the street. Mortality becomes an invitation to attention. If the reader recognizes that they too will someday bear the marks of time, they may become less willing to treat another person’s age as a spectacle, inconvenience, or excuse for dismissal.

The final appeal—“Remember, then, these words from one who knows”—shifts the poem from personal testimony to communal instruction. Yet “one who knows” does not imply that age automatically grants moral perfection or universal wisdom. Rather, the speaker knows something specific: what it is to be overlooked after living fully, and what it is to possess inward worlds that external observers cannot read. Her authority derives from experience, not from an abstract claim that all elders are inherently sage. This nuance matters. The poem’s respect for old age is grounded in individual complexity, not in a sentimental idealization that would simply substitute one stereotype for another.

“Behind each lined face, a universe grows” offers the poem’s most expansive metaphor. The word “behind” continues the poem’s concern with surfaces and depths. A face marked by lines is not a blank record of decay but a threshold to a universe: vast, dynamic, and difficult to comprehend fully. The verb “grows” is especially beautiful because it resists the assumption that old age is only diminishment. Even if the body weakens, the inner universe may continue to develop through memory, interpretation, relationships, imagination, grief, and insight. Growth does not cease simply because youth has passed. The poem thus offers a deeply humane alternative to cultural narratives that equate value with physical expansion, speed, or economic productivity.

The final image, “In every elder’s step, a lifetime treads, / Invisible worlds crown our silver heads,” gathers the poem’s major concerns into a memorable concluding vision. The step is modest and physical; it may be slow, unsteady, or cane-supported. But within it “a lifetime treads.” The present movement carries the weight and wonder of everything that preceded it. The “silver heads” are crowned not by institutional authority but by unseen worlds of experience. This is a powerful reversal of public perception. The elders whom society imagines as diminished are imagined by the poem as bearers of a hidden majesty. Their crown is not a claim to superiority over the young; it is a demand that their lives be acknowledged as fully human.

“Invisible” is emotionally effective because it moves through several registers without abandoning its central purpose. It begins in loneliness, expands into romance and adventure, admits trauma and grief, rises into indignation, and ends in grave, compassionate admonition. The reader is not asked only to feel sorry for the speaker. More importantly, the reader is asked to feel the shock of having misread a person. The poem makes visible the violence of the casual assumption—the belief that an older stranger is defined by frailty alone—and then repairs that violence through storytelling. Each remembered scene restores dimension to the woman’s identity.

Its language remains accessible, but its implications are far-reaching. The poem speaks to questions of public ethics, disability, gender, migration, memory, and the social meaning of the body. It also celebrates poetry’s distinctive capacity to interrupt habitual perception. In a few concentrated images, Devereux takes a figure who might be passed without notice and grants her narrative magnitude. That transformation is not merely aesthetic. It models an act of attention that readers can carry beyond the poem. To encounter another person with curiosity is to acknowledge that every visible life contains invisible histories.

Ultimately, Devereux’s poem refuses the cruel economy of a culture that measures human worth by youthfulness, efficiency, or outward vigor. Its speaker has been a dancer, lover, survivor, traveler, writer, performer, mourner, and forceful voice; she remains, in the present, a spirit that “burns still bright.” The poem’s enduring achievement lies in its insistence that age does not empty a person of meaning. On the contrary, age may make the hidden abundance of a life more urgent to recognize. “Invisible” calls readers to look longer, listen more carefully, and understand that the elder before them is never merely old. She is a universe in motion, carrying the irreplaceable record of a human life.

Conjured
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Conjured

by Robert Nathaniel Dett · English

Robert Nathaniel Dett portrait
11 October 1882 - 2 October 1943 (~61)
conjured love folk music spirituals composer tradition

Robert Nathaniel Dett occupies an unusual place in American cultural history: a composer renowned for weaving African American spirituals into the fabric of European art music, who was also, in his own quieter register, a working poet. "Conjured" comes from that lesser-known side of his output, and though it will never carry the weight of "Listen to the Lambs" or the "Juba Dance" from In the Bottoms, it rewards close attention precisely because it shows the musical sensibility of its author operating in verbal rather than tonal material. Reading the poem with Dett's biography in mind — his authorship of Album of a Heart, a 1911 collection of thirty poems on love, nature, philosophy, and music — reframes what might otherwise look like a slight piece of comic verse into something considerably richer: a composer's ear testing itself against the rhythms of ordinary speech, and a Black artist working within, and gently subverting, the folk idioms of his era.

To understand "Conjured," it helps to place Dett within the specific artistic project that defined his career. Dett was a Canadian-American composer, organist, pianist, choral director, and music professor who, during his lifetime, was a leading Black composer known for using African American folk songs and spirituals as the basis for choral and piano compositions written in the Romantic style of classical music. This was not incidental borrowing; it was a deliberate act of cultural translation. Dett wrote that although white Americans loved these songs and urged Black performers to "stick to them," they had never imagined the spirituals being used for the universal purposes of religious worship or high art — and he set himself the task of composing music that would preserve the idioms of Negro folk music while standing as serious art in its own right. That same impulse animates "Conjured," though in a lighter key. The poem draws on the vocabulary of hoodoo and folk conjure — the notion of being magically "conjured" by a woman, bewitched into lovesickness — a trope with deep roots in African American oral tradition, where conjure women and root doctors were understood to hold real power over the body and heart. Dett does not treat this material with anthropological distance or minstrel-style caricature; he inhabits it from the inside, using the conceit as a vehicle for universal comic experience: the disorientation of falling in love.

It is worth remembering, too, that Dett came to this folk material somewhat indirectly. He grew up learning the practice of incorporating spirituals into classical music at Oberlin Conservatory, where he was influenced by Antonín Dvořák's example of drawing on American folk material, and by Samuel Coleridge-Taylor's use of the Longfellow poem "Hiawatha" as the basis for a cantata. This lineage matters because it tells us Dett was trained to think of folk material as something worthy of formal, even ceremonial treatment — never merely comic filler. In "Conjured," that training shows in miniature: the poem's playful surface sits atop a genuine structural discipline, a controlled repetition and escalation that owes more to musical form (verse, refrain, variation) than to casual verse-making. One contemporary observer noted that in Dett's poetry, as in his music, creativity was stimulated by philosophic ideas and emotional expression, with the beauty of nature among his favorite and most frequently used subjects. "Conjured" substitutes romantic bewilderment for nature, but the same instinct toward emotional immediacy, rendered with formal control, is visible throughout.

There is also a biographical frame worth considering. Dett was born in a town in Ontario founded by formerly enslaved people who had escaped north, and he moved to Niagara Falls, New York, as a child, absorbing a hybridized North American Black cultural inheritance from an early age. His mother taught him Shakespeare and Tennyson, while his grandmother sang him spirituals — a household in which "high" literary English and vernacular Black musical tradition sat side by side, not in competition but in conversation. "Conjured" is a small artifact of exactly that fusion: a poem written in a vernacular, folk-inflected register but shaped with the metrical awareness of someone raised on canonical English verse.

The poem's central device is its extended, almost obsessive metaphor of bewitchment as physical affliction. The speaker does not simply say he is in love; he insists, with mounting theatricality, that he has been "conjured," and each subsequent image supplies a fresh bodily symptom of that spell. His heart is "all afire," his brain has "got the itch," his feelings are "patchy," he has been "sewed... up inside out," his thoughts are "side-tracked and switched," and finally he is "dumped... in the ditch." This chain of images functions almost like a set of variations on a musical theme — a single idea (bewitchment) explored through a sequence of increasingly vivid, increasingly absurd physical consequences. It is a technique any composer would recognize: statement, elaboration, development, return.

Equally striking is Dett's use of anaphora and refrain. The phrase "By that little witch!" recurs like a chorus, anchoring each stanza and giving the poem the shape of a song even on the page — unsurprising, perhaps, from a man who spent his professional life thinking in terms of choral repetition and call-and-response structure. The repetition is not merely decorative; it performs the psychological state being described. The speaker cannot stop returning to his obsession, and the poem's own compulsive return to its refrain enacts that inability at the level of form. This is a subtle but genuine literary accomplishment: the poem's structure mirrors its content, so that the reader experiences something of the speaker's helpless circling even while smiling at his predicament.

Dett also makes deft use of hyperbole and self-deprecating humor. Lines like "Then there's a hitch / Whenever I try to think" or "Dump me in the ditch" push the conceit of lovesickness to the edge of slapstick, and the poem's closing admission — "I'm in love or I'm crazy, / I can't tell quite which" — openly acknowledges the comic instability of the speaker's own testimony. This self-awareness keeps the poem from tipping into either mawkish sentiment or straightforward folk pastiche; it has the wink of someone who knows exactly how ridiculous lovesickness makes a person look, and is enjoying the performance of that ridiculousness. The quotation marks Dett places around "patchy" are a small but telling craft choice: they flag the word as colloquial, as if the speaker is borrowing a phrase he has heard elsewhere, giving the poem a texture of overheard speech rather than literary artifice.

The diction throughout is plain, monosyllabic, and percussive — "toss," "pitch," "itch," "stitch," "hitch," "switch," "ditch," "twitch," "which" — a battery of short, hard-edged words that click against one another with real rhythmic force. This is not accidental. A composer's ear naturally gravitates toward sound-patterning of this kind, and the effect here is genuinely musical: the words seem to want to be sung, tapped, or clapped rather than merely read. It is easy to imagine "Conjured" functioning as a lyric for a comic parlor song, in the same tradition of light vocal music that Dett, in his early professional years, performed to entertain hotel patrons before he turned to spirituals and concert composition.

At its surface, "Conjured" is a poem about the disorienting, almost feverish onset of infatuation — the sleeplessness, the racing thoughts, the bodily restlessness that accompany falling hard for someone. But its deeper interest lies in how it frames that experience through the folk imagination of conjure and witchcraft, treating romantic love not as a rational choice but as an external force that acts upon the body, seizing control of heart, brain, voice, and pulse alike. This is an old and rich literary strategy — love as bewitchment, as possession, as illness — with roots stretching from troubadour poetry through the blues tradition, where lovers are forever being "hoodooed," "rooted," or "fixed" by the object of their desire. Dett's poem sits comfortably in that lineage while giving it his own comic, buoyant treatment.

What makes the poem emotionally satisfying, despite — or because of — its lightness, is its honesty about the loss of control that accompanies genuine feeling. The speaker is not posturing as a confident suitor; he is bewildered, "patchy," sewn "inside out," unable to think straight or speak on pitch. There is something quietly moving beneath the humor: an admission that love strips away composure and leaves a person comically, helplessly exposed. The poem's closing uncertainty — is this love, or is it madness? — captures a feeling nearly everyone recognizes, the way early infatuation blurs the line between delight and derangement. Dett does not resolve that ambiguity, and the poem is stronger for leaving it open; the final declaration is not "I love her" but "I know I've been conjured," a formulation that preserves the speaker's bewilderment even in his moment of surrender.

There is also something worth noting about the poem's tone of joy. Dett's larger body of work — the spirituals, the sacred choral pieces, the Ordering of Moses — often carries the weight of suffering, endurance, and religious transcendence drawn from the experience of enslaved and post-enslavement Black communities. "Conjured" offers a different register entirely: playful, domestic, almost giddy. It is a reminder that the same artist capable of profound spiritual gravity could also delight in comic love poetry, and that Black cultural expression in this period, as in every period, was never monolithically solemn. The folk-magic conceit of conjure, elsewhere used in Black literature to explore real anxieties about power, agency, and the supernatural, is here repurposed for a wholly benign and universal subject: the giddy helplessness of a crush.

Dett's use of a folk-magical vocabulary to describe romantic feeling invites comparison to a long tradition of poets who reach for supernatural or medical language to explain what rational thought cannot. Where the Elizabethan sonneteers spoke of Cupid's arrows and burning darts, and the blues tradition spoke of roots, hexes, and mojo hands, Dett's speaker speaks the specific vernacular of his own community's folklore — evidence that he understood emotional experience as something best rendered through the idioms closest to hand, rather than through borrowed literary convention. This is entirely consistent with the philosophy that animated his musical career: a belief, as he put it, that his ambition as a musician was the advancement of his people and a conviction in the equality of opportunity for all peoples regardless of race, creed, or color — a conviction that extended, in practice, to treating vernacular Black expression as fully capable of carrying serious artistic weight, whether the subject was religious transcendence or a sleepless night spent thinking about a woman.

Philosophically, the poem also touches, however lightly, on a durable question: whether love is chosen or imposed upon us. The speaker's insistence that he has been "conjured" — acted upon rather than acting — echoes centuries of philosophical and literary meditation on the involuntary nature of desire, from Plato's account of love as a kind of divine madness to the courtly love tradition's insistence that the lover is stricken, wounded, overtaken. Dett does not engage this question with any solemnity, but the comic frame does not empty it of meaning; if anything, the humor makes the observation more persuasive, because it captures how genuinely disorienting infatuation feels even as it is happening to perfectly reasonable people who know, on some level, how silly they look.

Ultimately, "Conjured" succeeds because it trusts the reader to feel the emotional truth beneath its comic exaggeration. It is a small poem, unpretentious in its ambitions, but it carries the fingerprints of a serious artist: a composer's instinct for rhythm and repetition, a folklorist's respect for vernacular idiom, and a poet's willingness to let bewilderment stand as its own kind of honesty. Dett may be remembered chiefly for his spirituals and his choral masterworks, but "Conjured" is a delightful reminder that even our most serious artists contain multitudes — that the same hands capable of shaping "The Ordering of Moses" could also, with evident pleasure, capture the utterly human comedy of falling, helplessly and happily, under someone's spell.

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