Sonnet 17
Richard Barnfield’s “Sonnet 17” is an exquisite and unsettling lyric of erotic admiration. It begins as a luxuriant catalogue of a beautiful young man’s features, drawing upon the conventional materials of Renaissance love poetry—ivory, roses, lilies, pearls, nectar, honey, mythological divinities—but it ends in complaint. The speaker’s praise becomes an anguished question: how can a body so powerfully designed to arouse love remain unwilling to return it, and even inclined toward enduring hatred? This movement from visual delight to emotional injury gives the poem its unusual force. Barnfield does not merely describe beauty; he dramatizes beauty as an experience of subjection. The beloved’s appearance captivates the speaker, inspires poetry, and seems almost to impose desire upon all who behold it. Yet the beloved remains emotionally inaccessible. The sonnet’s glittering surface therefore conceals a meditation on power, desire, rejection, and the troubling gap between external loveliness and inward feeling.
The poem belongs to the rich culture of English sonneteering that flourished in the final decades of the sixteenth century. In this period, poets adapted Italian models of love lyric into an English literary environment intensely interested in courtship, classical learning, social performance, and the expressive possibilities of the vernacular. Sir Philip Sidney, Edmund Spenser, Samuel Daniel, Michael Drayton, and William Shakespeare all helped make the sonnet a central form for staging the dramas of longing. Barnfield, though less universally known than these contemporaries, was an important and distinctive participant in that movement. His verse displays a command of the elegant conventions readers expected: idealizing comparisons, rhetorical complaint, mythological allusion, and highly wrought descriptions of the beloved’s body. At the same time, his poems often direct that language toward male beauty in a notably open manner. “Sonnet 17” is especially compelling because it uses the inherited vocabulary of heterosexual Petrarchan love poetry to contemplate a male beloved.
Richard Barnfield’s literary career was brief but striking. Educated at Oxford and active during the highly competitive print culture of the 1590s, he published works that moved among pastoral verse, erotic myth, complaint, satire, and lyric love poetry. His early collection Cynthia, with Certain Sonnets, and the Legend of Cassandra appeared in 1595, at a moment when classical mythology and sonnet sequences were both exceptionally fashionable. Barnfield’s poems reveal the influence of Virgil, Ovid, and the pastoral conventions of European Renaissance literature, but they also possess an individual intensity. His male beloveds are not disguised as abstract ideals. They are bodily, vivid, and emotionally consequential. The modern reader should avoid imposing rigid contemporary categories of identity upon an Elizabethan writer, since early modern concepts of sex, gender, friendship, and erotic conduct did not map neatly onto present-day terminology. Nevertheless, the poem’s male-directed desire is unmistakable, and its frankness remains one of the most memorable aspects of Barnfield’s achievement.
The opening invocation of “Cherry-lipt Adonis” immediately announces the poem’s classical and erotic register. Adonis, in Greek and Roman myth, is the extraordinarily beautiful youth loved by Venus. His beauty is not passive decoration; it is dangerous, compelling, and fatality-shadowed. In Ovid’s influential version of the story, Venus’s devotion to Adonis displays the disruptive power of youthful male beauty, while Adonis’s death makes him an emblem of transience. By proposing that even Adonis “Might not compare” with the unnamed beloved, Barnfield performs a familiar gesture of hyperbole: the earthly youth surpasses mythic perfection. Yet the allusion does more than flatter. It places the beloved within a cultural history of male beauty as an object of desire and poetic attention. Shakespeare’s Venus and Adonis, published shortly before Barnfield’s collection, had also made Adonis a prominent figure in English literary culture. Barnfield’s use of the name participates in that contemporary fascination while directing it toward an intimate lyric complaint.
The phrase “in his snowie shape” establishes an ideal of whiteness that recurs throughout the poem. “Snowie,” “pure ivorie,” “lillie,” “pearle”: these terms make the beloved’s body gleam with pale, polished, precious substance. Renaissance poetic conventions frequently associated whiteness with beauty, delicacy, refinement, and apparent purity. Such language must be understood historically, as part of a symbolic and aesthetic vocabulary shaped by aristocratic ideals and by racialized assumptions that modern readers must examine critically rather than receive innocently. In Barnfield’s poem, whiteness is not simply a descriptive detail. It provides a luminous ground against which red lips, cheeks, grapes, strawberries, and coral become more vivid. The beloved is repeatedly imagined as a carefully arranged contrast of white and red, a color pattern central to Renaissance ideals of youthful beauty. His body seems less like ordinary flesh than a work of decorative art, a surface whose colors have been selected by an accomplished painter.
The third line develops this artistic metaphor with particular elegance: “On whose faire front a poet’s pen may write.” The beloved’s forehead becomes a page or writing surface, inviting inscription. This is a revealing image because it turns the act of praise back upon itself. The poet is not merely describing beauty; beauty creates the very possibility of poetry. A smooth and “faire front” is imagined as a blank, pure field for the poet’s pen, as though the beloved’s face solicits literary composition. Yet the phrase also carries a subtle tension. To write upon another person’s body is to claim an interpretive authority over it. The speaker attempts to transform a resistant beloved into text, into something readable and possessable through verse. The later complaint suggests the limits of this effort. Poetry can catalogue the face, mouth, tongue, teeth, and limbs, but it cannot compel affection or disclose the beloved’s inner life. The beloved remains, in the deepest sense, unreadable.
Barnfield’s descriptive method belongs to the tradition often called the blazon, in which a lover anatomizes the beloved by praising individual physical features. This convention had long been associated with Petrarchan poetry, where the lady’s eyes, hair, lips, hands, cheeks, and breast become occasions for elaborate comparison. Barnfield employs the technique with virtuoso pleasure, but his choice of object subtly changes its implications. The youthful male body is treated with the same refinement, tenderness, and sensual attention conventionally directed toward an idealized woman. “His love-enticing delicate soft limbs” are “rarely fram’d” to entrap “poore gazine eies.” The language of softness and delicacy does not deny the beloved’s masculinity so much as complicate simplistic assumptions about gendered beauty. Renaissance culture could admire youthful male grace, smoothness, and ornamental beauty, especially through classical models such as Adonis, Ganymede, Narcissus, or Hyacinthus. Barnfield draws from that tradition while making its erotic charge immediate.
The verbs associated with sight reveal that beauty here is an active force. The beloved’s limbs are “fram’d t’intrap” gazing eyes. Vision, usually imagined as a means of gaining knowledge or mastery, becomes a form of captivity. The observer looks, but the act of looking catches him in a trap. This inversion is crucial to the poem’s emotional logic. The speaker seems to possess the beloved through exact description, yet he is the one overcome by what he sees. The language anticipates the final accusation that the body is “sinne-procuring”: the beautiful body appears to procure, invite, or generate desire in others. Such phrasing does not necessarily mean that the beloved consciously intends seduction. Rather, it expresses the speaker’s experience of beauty as something nearly coercive. The gaze is not neutral appreciation; it becomes an encounter with vulnerability. To behold the beloved is to be made helplessly desirous.
The poem’s colors intensify this sense of sensory abundance. The beloved’s “roseate red” exceeds “the crimson grape,” while his cheeks combine “the lillie and carnation dies.” The vocabulary of flowers, fruit, and pigments allows Barnfield to move fluidly among natural beauty, culinary sweetness, and visual art. “Dies,” an early form of “dyes,” points toward cosmetic or painterly coloration. The cheeks are not merely naturally attractive; they seem to have been tinted by an artist. Apollo, god of the sun, music, prophecy, and poetry, appears in the claim that the beloved’s complexion surpasses or eclipses what Apollo can produce or reveal. The wording is compressed and somewhat difficult, as is often the case in Elizabethan lyric, but its effect is clear: even the god associated with radiant light and artistic excellence is diminished before this beauty. The beloved’s face is thus both natural and artificial, floral and painted, earthly and godlike.
This fusion of media is one of Barnfield’s most sophisticated techniques. The sonnet repeatedly represents the beloved through materials belonging to different arts: writing, painting, sculpture, and perhaps even architecture. The “ivorie white” suggests carved statuary; the “tincture” of the cheeks suggests painting; the forehead invites writing; the mouth becomes a “Hive” in which the Muses establish their “mansion.” The speaker cannot settle upon one mode of representation because no single art seems sufficient. The beloved provokes an aesthetic excess. He must be compared to flowers, fruit, gemstones, mythic figures, and divine powers because ordinary language fails before his appeal. This is a central paradox of praise poetry: the poet declares the beloved incomparable while producing comparison after comparison. Far from being a weakness, that paradox gives the poem its momentum. Every image admits that it is inadequate, and every new image renews the effort to make the beloved imaginatively present.
The movement from face to mouth marks a deepening of the poem’s sensuality. “His lips ripe strawberries in nectar wet” is an especially concentrated image of ripeness, moisture, sweetness, and anticipated taste. The metaphor does not merely invite visual appreciation; it activates touch and appetite. Strawberries, associated with summer abundance and fleeting freshness, evoke a beauty at once luxurious and perishable. “Nectar,” the drink of the gods, elevates the image from earthly fruitfulness to divine sustenance. The beloved’s mouth is then called a “Hive,” and his tongue a “hony-combe.” These images are delightfully abundant: the mouth contains not one sweet substance but an entire productive structure of sweetness. Honey has ancient associations with eloquence, poetic inspiration, healing, and pleasure. To describe speech as honeyed was a classical commonplace, but Barnfield makes the commonplace tactile and erotic. The mouth promises speech, kissing, nourishment, and poetic music simultaneously.
The presence of the Muses within this hive extends the connection between erotic desire and literary creation. “Where Muses (like bees) make their mansion” imagines the beloved’s tongue as the dwelling place of poetic inspiration. The Muses, daughters of memory and patrons of the arts, transform his speech into something sacred and productive. Their bee-like activity is particularly apt. Bees create honey, but they also move from flower to flower, gathering sweetness and converting it into a communal treasure. Similarly, poetic language gathers images from the world and reshapes them into song. Barnfield implies that the beloved is not simply beautiful to look at; he is a source of verbal delight, perhaps a speaker whose words enchant as much as his body does. At another level, however, the image describes the speaker’s own poetic compulsion. The Muses may inhabit the beloved’s mouth because the poet’s imagination has made it their residence. Desire itself has become a generator of verse.
The closing image of “pure pearle in blushing correll set” continues the poem’s familiar contrast between white and red. Teeth are pearls, the gums coral; the mouth becomes a jewelled setting. The adjective “blushing” is especially suggestive. Coral is naturally red, but to call it blushing gives the mouth an emotional responsiveness, a capacity for modesty or shame. The beloved has been described as an object of exquisite stillness, like ivory or pearl, yet this word briefly animates him. It may also project the speaker’s feelings onto the beloved’s body, making physical color appear to reveal inner emotion. Such projection is characteristic of love poetry: the lover reads signs of affection, resistance, or modesty in every feature. Barnfield’s poem is alert to the seductive uncertainties of this practice. Physical beauty is visible, but emotional reciprocity is not. The red of the mouth can be admired, but it cannot reliably be interpreted.
That uncertainty erupts in the final question, where the poem abandons its sequence of comparisons and confronts the beloved’s conduct. “Oh how can such a body sinne-procuring, / Be slow to love, and quicke to hate, enduring?” The rhetorical question does not receive an answer because none is possible. Its purpose is to expose the speaker’s bewilderment. He assumes that a body capable of awakening desire ought somehow to be matched by a loving disposition. Yet this assumption is precisely what the poem has shown to be false. Beauty has immense power over the observer, but it does not obligate its possessor to feel compassion, desire, or love in return. The beloved’s slowness to love and quickness to hate create a sharp moral contrast with the sweetness previously attributed to his lips and tongue. The hive of honey becomes, retrospectively, a possible site of stings. The beautiful body is not a guarantee of a beautiful soul.
“Sinne-procuring” is the poem’s most morally charged phrase, and it deserves careful attention. In an Elizabethan religious culture, “sin” could name theological transgression, sensual excess, social impropriety, or the wider human condition of fallen desire. The word may signal the speaker’s awareness that erotic attraction can be morally fraught, especially when directed in ways subject to social or religious condemnation. But the phrase also participates in a conventional rhetoric of love, in which the beloved’s beauty is blamed for the lover’s emotional disorder. The speaker’s desire is represented as something the body “procures,” as if the beloved were responsible for the observer’s inward response. Modern readers may recognize the ethical difficulty in that gesture. Beauty does not make a person culpable for another’s desire. Barnfield’s power lies partly in his willingness to let that difficulty remain exposed. The speaker is wounded, but his complaint is not automatically just; it is the language of someone trying to understand rejection through the only terms desire has given him.
The poem’s emotional impact depends on this collision between adoration and resentment. At first, the speaker’s attention seems almost devotional. He elevates the beloved above Adonis and Apollo, associates his features with ivory and pearl, and makes his mouth a sanctuary for the Muses. The tone is reverent, delighted, and sensually absorbed. By the conclusion, however, that reverence has become grievance. The speaker feels that the beloved’s loveliness has made him vulnerable to a love that is not returned. The result is not simple bitterness. The final “enduring” emphasizes duration: hatred, or perhaps the beloved’s harshness, persists. This word gives the poem a lingering ache. The beauty catalogued so brilliantly at the beginning cannot be forgotten; it continues to govern the speaker even after it has become a source of pain. Barnfield captures a painful truth about desire: admiration can survive disappointment, and the very qualities one loves may become the instruments of one’s suffering.
In this respect, “Sonnet 17” invites comparison with Shakespeare’s sonnets addressed to the so-called Fair Youth. Like Barnfield, Shakespeare often considers a young man’s extraordinary beauty through imagery of flowers, precious substances, summer, painting, and artistic preservation. Both poets explore the mismatch between beauty and moral goodness, and both understand that praise can contain complaint. Yet Barnfield’s poem is more concentrated in its physical inventory and more direct in its sensual language. Shakespeare frequently broadens desire into questions of time, reproduction, social inheritance, or poetic immortality; Barnfield stays intensely close to the desiring gaze and to the beloved’s immediate bodily presence. His speaker does not seek to preserve beauty against time so much as to comprehend why beauty, so apparently generous in form, can be emotionally withholding in action.
The poem may also be read alongside the tradition of Petrarch, whose idealized beloved Laura is repeatedly fragmented into dazzling features and elevated through impossible comparisons. Barnfield inherits Petrarchism’s language of servitude, visual captivation, and unrequited devotion, but he makes its conventions newly unstable. The conventional beloved is usually a distant woman whose chastity or coldness intensifies the male poet’s complaint. Here, the beloved is male, and the poem’s decorative language—often coded in Renaissance practice as feminine—adorns a young man. This does not make the poem anachronistically modern, but it does reveal the flexibility of Renaissance poetic gender. Literary convention gave writers a space in which male beauty could be elaborately admired, desired, and lamented. Barnfield uses that space with unusual boldness, reminding us that the literary past contains more varied forms of feeling than simplified accounts of it often allow.
Even the poem’s sound contributes to its sensuous atmosphere. Soft consonants and liquid sounds recur in phrases such as “love-enticing delicate soft limbs,” “lillie,” “lovely tincture,” and “hony-combe.” These sounds slow the reader’s movement and encourage lingering attention, as though language itself caresses the features it names. By contrast, words such as “intrap,” “sinne-procuring,” “slow,” “quicke,” and “hate” introduce harder pressures into the poem’s final movement. The linguistic texture thus mirrors the emotional shift from pleasure to accusation. Barnfield also delights in compound expressions—“Cherry-lipt,” “love-enticing,” “sinne-procuring”—that compress physical description and moral judgment into memorable verbal units. His spelling, characteristic of the period, should not be mistaken for imprecision. The old forms preserve a language in motion, one that is inventive, tactile, and capable of making thought feel physically present.
Ultimately, “Sonnet 17” is a poem about the limits of aesthetic possession. The speaker can make the beloved’s face into a page, his cheeks into a painted composition, his lips into fruit, his mouth into a hive, and his teeth into jewels. Through poetry, he can arrange the beloved into an enduring pattern of gorgeous images. But he cannot make beauty answer him. He cannot turn physical perfection into affection, speech into sympathy, or poetic idealization into mutual love. The sonnet’s final question therefore unsettles all that precedes it. The accumulated praise is genuine, but it is also a record of longing’s failure. Barnfield’s extraordinary gift is to make that failure beautiful without making it easy. His poem remains alive because it understands how admiration can exalt and humble us at once: we praise what we cannot possess, we create language around what remains distant, and we discover in poetry a form capable of holding both rapture and hurt.