A poem about perfectionism might use
the fly in the ointment to describe the single
detail that, once noticed, makes the otherwise excellent impossible to accept — the obsessive's particular suffering; In a poem celebrating
a day of almost-perfect happiness, the fly in the ointment is the intrusive thought, the small
wrong note, the detail that prevents complete
surrender to what is otherwise wonderful; The biblical origin of the phrase — from
Ecclesiastes, the ancient
observation that dead flies corrupt precious ointment — gives
a poet access to the long tradition of wisdom literature that finds in small imperfections the
figure of
mortality's intrusion into the ideal; A love poem might describe the fly in the ointment of an otherwise excellent relationship — the single incompatibility that, small as it seems, changes the quality of everything around it; In a satirical poem about a political program that has almost everything right, the fly in the ointment is the single provision that reveals the ideological assumption that corrupts the whole; The idiom suits poems about the relationship between beauty and flaw, asking whether the perfect thing from which nothing can be subtracted might require the fly to complete it — the imperfection being the mark of the living, the real, the genuinely experienced rather than merely imagined