A quiet notice V2Melody closes at midnight on , Spanish time.

Closes

A note from Richard

V2Melody will close at midnight on 20 January 2028

This site has been a retirement project in musical poetry: poems chosen with care and set to music, offered freely for as long as it felt right to keep the garden open.

The work no longer holds the place it once did in my life. I have gone as far with it as I wish to go. Like a sand mandala, it was made to be completed and then released. I am not attached to its permanence, and I do not believe any of it needs to last beyond the time it was given. The poems were already here before I arrived and began to experiment with them. They will still be here when these musical experiments, and indeed myself, have been swept away, like the sand of a mandala. Nothing has been lost.

I want a simpler end to my life, days of simple love and enjoyment with my wonderful wife of 20 years. The work of maintaining a server, the monitoring, and the residual obligations that come with keeping a site alive no longer fit that life.

From 4 November 2026 I will not be adding new poems or musical poems to the site.

The experimental music I am making now is on my Suno profile. Those pieces stay there, and are not added to this site.

Until midnight on 20 January 2028, Spanish time, everything remains available exactly as it is. That is when my VPS server contract comes to an end, and it will not be renewed. After that, the server will be switched off and the site will disappear.

The Mandala Is Finished explains this more fully.

Thank you to anyone who found a poem, a track, or a quiet moment here.

The pleasure was in the making.

Richard

Home › Glossary › Letter F

Fragmented lines

Structure
Pronunciation

Understanding ARPABET Pronunciation

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The pronunciation guide uses the ARPABET phonetic system—the same system used in speech recognition and text-to-speech applications.

Vowel Examples:
AE1 = cat, bat
EH1 = bed, head
IY1 = see, me
OW1 = go, boat
UW1 = boot, do
Stress Numbers:
0 = no stress (unstressed)
1 = primary stress (loud)
2 = secondary stress (medium)
Example:
AH0 TH IY1 N AH0
= a-THEE-na (Athena)

The stressed syllable (marked with 1) is pronounced louder and clearer than others.

Quick Definition

Lines intentionally broken or incomplete to evoke discontinuity or emotional disruption

Detailed Definition
Fragmented lines are poetic lines deliberately broken into disjointed phrases, incomplete clauses, or isolated words, often using caesurae, lineation, or white space to convey psychological rupture, trauma, or modernist disillusionment; this technique—central to poets like T.S. Eliot, H.D., or contemporary experimental writers—rejects syntactic continuity to mirror the fractured nature of perception, memory, or identity in the modern world.
Example
Example in poetry:
Eliot’s "The Waste Land" uses fragmented lines: "April is the cruellest month, breeding / Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing / Memory and desire, stirring / Dull roots with spring rain"; Pound’s "In a Station of the Metro" is two fragmented lines; Williams’s "The Red Wheelbarrow" breaks syntax visually; H.D.’s imagist poems use clipped, disjointed phrasing; Claudia Rankine’s "Citizen" blends prose and fragmented lyric lines.
Additional Notes
Fragmented lines break syntax or thought across enjambed or caesura-heavy lines, mimicking thought processes, trauma, or modern dislocation (e.g., Williams, H.D.). They challenge linear reading and emphasize individual words. Students should ask: what is the effect of the break? Does it create ambiguity, urgency, or pause? Contrast with “ornate close,” where lines are syntactically complete.
Also Known As
Disjointed lines Broken syntax Fractured verse Discontinuous phrasing Dispersed verse Incomplete lines
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