A quiet notice V2Melody closes at midnight on , Spanish time.

Closes

A note from Richard

V2Melody will close at midnight on 20 January 2028

This site has been a retirement project in musical poetry: poems chosen with care and set to music, offered freely for as long as it felt right to keep the garden open.

The work no longer holds the place it once did in my life. I have gone as far with it as I wish to go. Like a sand mandala, it was made to be completed and then released. I am not attached to its permanence, and I do not believe any of it needs to last beyond the time it was given. The poems were already here before I arrived and began to experiment with them. They will still be here when these musical experiments, and indeed myself, have been swept away, like the sand of a mandala. Nothing has been lost.

I want a simpler end to my life, days of simple love and enjoyment with my wonderful wife of 20 years. The work of maintaining a server, the monitoring, and the residual obligations that come with keeping a site alive no longer fit that life.

From 4 November 2026 I will not be adding new poems or musical poems to the site.

The experimental music I am making now is on my Suno profile. Those pieces stay there, and are not added to this site.

Until midnight on 20 January 2028, Spanish time, everything remains available exactly as it is. That is when my VPS server contract comes to an end, and it will not be renewed. After that, the server will be switched off and the site will disappear.

The Mandala Is Finished explains this more fully.

Thank you to anyone who found a poem, a track, or a quiet moment here.

The pleasure was in the making.

Richard

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Revision

Concept
Pronunciation

Understanding ARPABET Pronunciation

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The pronunciation guide uses the ARPABET phonetic system—the same system used in speech recognition and text-to-speech applications.

Vowel Examples:
AE1 = cat, bat
EH1 = bed, head
IY1 = see, me
OW1 = go, boat
UW1 = boot, do
Stress Numbers:
0 = no stress (unstressed)
1 = primary stress (loud)
2 = secondary stress (medium)
Example:
AH0 TH IY1 N AH0
= a-THEE-na (Athena)

The stressed syllable (marked with 1) is pronounced louder and clearer than others.

Quick Definition

The act or process of reworking a poem to refine meaning, form, or sound

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How to Write About a Poem — Writing about poetry is not a matter of finding hidden answers or naming as many techniques as possible. It is the practice of making a thoughtful claim, supporting it with well-chosen details, and explaining how those details create meaning.

Detailed Definition
Revision in poetry refers to the process of reworking a draft through changes in diction, structure, rhythm, or imagery to refine meaning, enhance musicality, or clarify intent; it is central to poetic craft, reflecting the belief that poems are made, not born, through iterative labor.
Example
Example in poetry:
Walt Whitman revised “Leaves of Grass” repeatedly, expanding and reordering poems; Emily Dickinson revised poems through variant wordings in fascicles; T.S. Eliot revised “The Waste Land” with Pound’s editorial suggestions; Seamus Heaney revised “North” to clarify political resonances in later editions.
Additional Notes
Revision in poetry involves reworking drafts for clarity, rhythm, or impact; essential to craft—contrasts with spontaneous or first-thought approaches.
Other Meanings of “Revision”
Also Known As
Poetic redrafting textual refinement lyrical editing compositional reworking Correction Reconsideration Editing
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