Shaving

Craft Terms
Pronunciation

Understanding ARPABET Pronunciation

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The pronunciation guide uses the ARPABET phonetic system—the same system used in speech recognition and text-to-speech applications.

Vowel Examples:
AE1 = cat, bat
EH1 = bed, head
IY1 = see, me
OW1 = go, boat
UW1 = boot, do
Stress Numbers:
0 = no stress (unstressed)
1 = primary stress (loud)
2 = secondary stress (medium)
Example:
AH0 TH IY1 N AH0
= a-THEE-na (Athena)

The stressed syllable (marked with 1) is pronounced louder and clearer than others.

Quick Definition

Shaving is the removal of very small amounts of language to improve precision, pace, or pressure.

Detailed Definition
Shaving differs from a major cut because it works at the scale of articles, modifiers, connective phrases, punctuation, and repeated sounds. A few shaved words can make a line breathe more naturally or allow an image to stand without explanation. The process is delicate: removing every irregularity may flatten voice and rhythm. Poets often shave while reading aloud, listening for places where the mouth labors unnecessarily or where a line carries more verbal weight than its thought requires.
Example
Example in poetry:
Shaving removes excess words without changing the poem’s basic structure, as in cutting “very cold and completely silent” to “cold and silent”; A poet may shave repeated modifiers from every line to make the rhythm more tensile; In revision, shaving a final explanatory sentence can allow the image to remain ambiguous; A poet can shave a sonnet’s diction until its fourteen lines carry only necessary stresses
Additional Notes
Shaving describes micro-revision: removing a word, syllable, qualifier, repetition, or punctuation mark to make a line more exact. Unlike cutting a whole image or stanza, shaving changes the poem by degrees, often improving pace and emphasis. Read the line aloud before and after each change, since a tiny deletion may alter breath, stress, ambiguity, or emotional pressure. It is closely related to pruning and compression.
Also Known As
Paring Clip shive
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