A quiet notice V2Melody closes at midnight on , Spanish time.

Closes

A note from Richard

V2Melody will close at midnight on 20 January 2028

This site has been a retirement project in musical poetry: poems chosen with care and set to music, offered freely for as long as it felt right to keep the garden open.

The work no longer holds the place it once did in my life. I have gone as far with it as I wish to go. Like a sand mandala, it was made to be completed and then released. I am not attached to its permanence, and I do not believe any of it needs to last beyond the time it was given. The poems were already here before I arrived and began to experiment with them. They will still be here when these musical experiments, and indeed myself, have been swept away, like the sand of a mandala. Nothing has been lost.

I want a simpler end to my life, days of simple love and enjoyment with my wonderful wife of 20 years. The work of maintaining a server, the monitoring, and the residual obligations that come with keeping a site alive no longer fit that life.

From 4 November 2026 I will not be adding new poems or musical poems to the site.

The experimental music I am making now is on my Suno profile. Those pieces stay there, and are not added to this site.

Until midnight on 20 January 2028, Spanish time, everything remains available exactly as it is. That is when my VPS server contract comes to an end, and it will not be renewed. After that, the server will be switched off and the site will disappear.

The Mandala Is Finished explains this more fully.

Thank you to anyone who found a poem, a track, or a quiet moment here.

The pleasure was in the making.

Richard

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Subordinate verse

Form
Pronunciation

Understanding ARPABET Pronunciation

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The pronunciation guide uses the ARPABET phonetic system—the same system used in speech recognition and text-to-speech applications.

Vowel Examples:
AE1 = cat, bat
EH1 = bed, head
IY1 = see, me
OW1 = go, boat
UW1 = boot, do
Stress Numbers:
0 = no stress (unstressed)
1 = primary stress (loud)
2 = secondary stress (medium)
Example:
AH0 TH IY1 N AH0
= a-THEE-na (Athena)

The stressed syllable (marked with 1) is pronounced louder and clearer than others.

Quick Definition

Poetry using syntactic subordination as a structuring device to layer meanings and interdependent clauses

Detailed Definition
Subordinate verse is poetry structured predominantly through syntactic subordination—using clauses introduced by “because,” “although,” “when,” etc.—to establish hierarchical relationships between ideas; this creates a sense of reasoned progression, causal depth, or psychological complexity, contrasting with paratactic styles that present ideas as equals.
Example
Example in poetry:
Subordinate verse appears in Milton’s complex syntax: “Him the Almighty Power / Hurled headlong flaming from th’ ethereal sky”; In T.S. Eliot’s “The Waste Land,” dependent clauses fragment meaning; In Wallace Stevens’ “The Idea of Order at Key West,” layered subordinate structures; In contemporary poet Jorie Graham, where syntax mirrors cognitive process; In Seamus Heaney’s “North,” historical subordination in poetic form.
Additional Notes
Subordinate verse prioritizes background elements (mood, atmosphere) over main action. Related to peripheral run-on. Effective in impressionistic poetry—ask what is deliberately kept secondary and why.
Also Known As
Subordinate construction poetry Clause-anchored verse Embedded thought lyric Hierarchical phrasing poetry Hypotactic verse
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