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Closes

A note from Richard

V2Melody will close at midnight on 20 January 2028

This site has been a retirement project in musical poetry: poems chosen with care and set to music, offered freely for as long as it felt right to keep the garden open.

The work no longer holds the place it once did in my life. I have gone as far with it as I wish to go. Like a sand mandala, it was made to be completed and then released. I am not attached to its permanence, and I do not believe any of it needs to last beyond the time it was given. The poems were already here before I arrived and began to experiment with them. They will still be here when these musical experiments, and indeed myself, have been swept away, like the sand of a mandala. Nothing has been lost.

I want a simpler end to my life, days of simple love and enjoyment with my wonderful wife of 20 years. The work of maintaining a server, the monitoring, and the residual obligations that come with keeping a site alive no longer fit that life.

From 4 November 2026 I will not be adding new poems or musical poems to the site.

The experimental music I am making now is on my Suno profile. Those pieces stay there, and are not added to this site.

Until midnight on 20 January 2028, Spanish time, everything remains available exactly as it is. That is when my VPS server contract comes to an end, and it will not be renewed. After that, the server will be switched off and the site will disappear.

The Mandala Is Finished explains this more fully.

Thank you to anyone who found a poem, a track, or a quiet moment here.

The pleasure was in the making.

Richard

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Emendation device

Device
Pronunciation

Understanding ARPABET Pronunciation

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The pronunciation guide uses the ARPABET phonetic system—the same system used in speech recognition and text-to-speech applications.

Vowel Examples:
AE1 = cat, bat
EH1 = bed, head
IY1 = see, me
OW1 = go, boat
UW1 = boot, do
Stress Numbers:
0 = no stress (unstressed)
1 = primary stress (loud)
2 = secondary stress (medium)
Example:
AH0 TH IY1 N AH0
= a-THEE-na (Athena)

The stressed syllable (marked with 1) is pronounced louder and clearer than others.

Quick Definition

A poetic technique that revises or refines earlier wording within the same poem, often to clarify, intensify, or correct initial expression.

Detailed Definition
A deliberate correction or modification included in the final text of a poem for rhetorical effect, differing from revision by remaining visible as part of the poem's surface. This device shows the poet's thought process, creates conversational tone, or emphasizes the emended point through contrast with the original statement. The emendation appears spontaneous but serves strategic purposes, guiding readers' attention and suggesting that meaning emerges through active thinking rather than predetermined statement.
Example
Example in poetry:
Emendation device corrects or revises within the poem: Alexander Pope’s “The Dunciad” includes mock-editorial notes; John Berryman’s “Dream Songs” use self-interruption (“I’m obliged to say I’m not”); contemporary poets like Claudia Rankine insert bracketed corrections in “Citizen”; Ezra Pound’s “Cantos” include marginalia as poetic emendation; Anne Carson’s “Nox” uses fragmented translation as editorial process.
Additional Notes
Deliberate correction within poem for rhetorical effect. Differs from revision by being part of final text. Shows thought process, creates conversational tone, or emphasizes the emended point through contrast.
Also Known As
Correction device Revision technique Emendation strategy Self-correction Epanorthotic correction
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