Public Poem Comments

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To One Unknown

(2025-07-05 10:56)

"Wow! The music was so ethereal. I loved the longing feel of this poem. This music makes me feel sober, and my own longing finds a temporary reprieve until it's ready to take flight again. I'd like you to set two more of her poems to music: 1) 'Against the sun...' and 2) 'Song' ('A few more windy days...')."

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If This Be All

(2025-07-05 10:30)

"I adore how beautifully the music and poem speak to one's heart. I'd love to see more poems by Anne Brontë set to music. As the lesser-known sister among the Brontë trio, Anne's work is equally sweet and passionate. Could you set these five poems by Anne Brontë to music: 1) 'Weep not too much, my darling', 2) 'Student's Serenade', 3) 'Severed and gone', 4) 'Verses To A Child', and 5) 'The Parting'?"

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Alone

(2025-07-04 12:03)

"I love how beautifully this light music captured the essence of the poem. I adore how Sara Teasdale, in such simple and direct words, captures strong and complex emotions. Her poems on love and longing are marvelous. I'd like you to set as many poems as possible from her "Love Songs" collection to music. One poem that I'd particularly like to see set to music is "Erinna" from her collection "Helen of Troy and Other Poems"."

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"Thank you for highlighting what you appreciate about Sara Teasdale’s poetry. I agree that her abilit..."Richard

A Tear and a Smile

(2025-07-03 11:01)

"While reading and listening to this poem, I felt so light, like a cloud myself; my spirit took wings, and I drifted to glorier skies and planets of my being. I felt all the transitions from sorrow to joy till a final reunion with God. Splendid work!"

Please do all the poems by khalil gibran. His poems are so spiritual and filled with ecstasy!

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"Thank you for sharing such a thoughtful response to Gibran's "A Tear and a Smile." I appreciate how ..."Richard

Gertrude; Or, Fidelity Till Death

(2025-07-03 09:42)

"Wow! What a terrific performance! I trembled on listening track 1. Can you do Greek Parting Song by Felicia Hemans as well? I'd like to listen to it in a similar fashion. In fact there are many hemans poems that I would like to listen to with all their emotional intensity shining forth in musical settings. For now, I'd like the Greek Parting Song to be set to dramatic and melancholic music."

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"Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I am glad that you found that arrangement moving. Your sugges..."Richard

Casabianca

(2025-07-01 14:44)

Superb performances!

Please do more poems by Felicia Hemans. Her poems are so beautifully emotional. I like her more dramatic works. Can you do "Gertrude, or, fidelity till death" ( from records of the woman). It would be fantastic for a dramatic and emotionally rife musical setting.

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"I'm delighted you enjoyed the performances. Felicia Hemans truly is a remarkable poet. Her dramatic ..."Richard

The Road Leading Nowhere

(2025-07-01 14:38)

What a brilliant performance to a brilliant poem!

The fatal hour at the top of the hill is an inevitable encounter in life. Everything would fall still, and in that stillness, we would realize that we are leaving behind a greater void than the one we are about to enter.

Also, I want to take your attention to another Mary Robinson (1757-1800). She also wrote beautifully. Her lyrical tales would do good for a musical setting.

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"Thank you for your thoughtful reflection on the poem and performance. Your observation about the "fa..."Richard

O Ailing Love

(2025-06-23 08:20)

What a profoundly moving experience! "O Ailing Love" is such a powerful meditation on the decline and impermanence of passion; Millay’s imagery of love as a wounded bird, once majestic but now earthbound, is both haunting and beautiful. The poem’s resigned melancholy and its final vision of the fading swans linger long after reading, capturing the bittersweet complexity of letting go. The musical arrangement elevates this emotional journey even further. The beautiful female vocalist brings out every nuance of longing and acceptance in Millay’s words, her voice full of tenderness and quiet strength. Listening to her performance, I felt the poem’s sorrow and grace as if they were my own. This is a breathtakingly emotional and beautiful interpretation. Thank you for creating such a memorable experience.

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"Your reflection on "O Ailing Love" captures exactly what draws me to Millay's work: her ability to t..."Richard

Stanzas of Sorrow

(2025-06-29 08:42)

The music is sweetly melancholic! 

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"I appreciate you listening and offering your feedback. Opie's verse reveals such a devastating emoti..."Richard

Alas! Alas! I Can't Forget

(2025-06-29 07:22)

Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful.

"The music transported me to another land with its classical charm and aura. What a lovely performance!"

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"Thank you for your comments. I am glad to hear that the music resonated with you. It is always inter..."Richard

The Stormy Petrel

(2025-06-22 21:20)

Absolutely brilliant! Those driving reggaeton rhythms instantly pulled me in. The hypnotic beats and staccato desert blues guitar create such a unique atmosphere. This arrangement is both adventurous and uplifting. What a fantastic way to bring this lovely poem to life!

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"Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the arrangement. I’m pleased the reggaeton rhythms and desert bl..."Richard

The Haunted House

(2025-06-28 06:46)

"This performance just blew me away. I have always loved Felicia Hemans. It's the work of a singer to give soul to the poem. The poem comes with wings; it waits for its righteous singer, and then it flies and makes a home in its needed owner's heart. So, three people are involved in the creative process of the poem: the poet who writes with a heart, the singer who sings with a soul, and the reader who reads and listens with a mind and a heart attentive to both."

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"Thank you for sharing your perspective, Sarakhatun. I appreciate how you describe the journey of a p..."Richard

A Dead Girl To Her Lover

(2025-06-28 06:35)

I couldn't put into words my love for this poem and for all three ethereal tracks. When I first listened to them, I felt entranced. I thought they couldn't be performed any better than they already are - they're just perfect. The longing in the poem is also beautifully reflected in the melancholic voices of the songstresses who sang them with such depth of feeling. My heart finally found an outlet for its emotions in listening to these tracks, and I cried a little when I first heard them two months ago. This website is like a dream come true. Can I ask you for also playing in tune some of the poems of amelia opie(1769-1853).She also wrote beautifully on love with nature imagery. Her poems like "lines to Henry" etc.

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"Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts about the poem and the tracks. I appreciate hea..."Richard

Brancusi’s Golden Bird

(2025-06-26 08:27)

A musical interpretation of a poem interpreting a work of art. Interesting. Thank you for introducing me to this poet. I had never heard of Mina Loy before today.

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"Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I am glad you found the idea of layering musical interpretati..."Richard

Property of Pigeons

(2025-06-26 08:30)

"as if an angel had been sick" - one of my favourite lines in a poem.

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"Thank you for your comment, Maggie. That line stands out for me as well: it manages to be both start..."Richard

Too long, skeleton

(2025-06-27 15:26)

A little bleak.

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"LyricalSinger, thanks for sharing your thoughts. I agree, the tone of "Too long, skeleton" is certai..."Richard

A Sense of Humor

(2025-06-25 11:27)

Sense of humor indeed will keep us floating through this turbulent sea of life. What a magnificent performance to a powerful poem!

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"Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! I couldn’t agree more; humor really is a lifeboat in ..."Richard

Wind on the Hill

(2025-06-21 12:17)

What a wonderful experience! I’ve always loved “Wind on the Hill,” but hearing it brought to life with those hypnotic Afrobeats rhythms gave the poem a whole new dimension. This arrangement is both playful and deeply moving. Thank you for sharing such a creative and joyful interpretation!

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"Thank you so much, Maggie! I’m thrilled you enjoyed these arrangements—“Wind on the Hill” has always..."Richard
(2025-06-25 11:11)

Very beautiful! The track 2 successfully captures the whimsical and quizzical nature of the poem. Track 1 is amazing too!

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"Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m delighted that you enjoyed both tracks and that the whims..."Richard

O, that this too too solid flesh would melt

(2025-06-24 22:08)

I love the word-play where William says: "O, that this too too solid flesh would melt, Thaw and resolve itself into a dew!" where the play on words of "a dew" and "adieu" are so obvious but perhaps so overlooked. Maybe the audience of the day would have got the joke?

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"That's quite an observation. "a dew" - "adieu" - Thank you for pointing this out."Richard